Verbs
Punctuation
Parallelism
100
Tomorrow is my favorite day of the week it being a Friday. 

Tomorrow is my favorite day of the week because it is a Friday.

100

My friends, Danny and Zander-- bought two ice creams each. 

, , or - -

100

Current events help students with understanding concepts, research, and analysis. 

concepts

200

She and her friend has so much homework.

have

200

JFK believes in one acronym, PRIDE.

: or -

200

Spring Break is about enjoying time with your family, laughter, and sleeping. 

laughing

300

The dog, who has tons of doggy friends, enjoy playing with everyone at doggy day care.

enjoys

300

The January 6th trials are ongoing which is fascinating, however I have barely paid attention.

a.  ongoing; which is fascinating, however

b. ongoing, which is fascinating, however

c. ongoing which is fascinating; however,

d. ongoing, which is fascinating; however

d. The January 6th trials are ongoing, which is fascinating; however I have barely paid attention.

300

The SAT is challenging, time-consuming, and makes students exhausted. 

exhausting

400

Court reporters record the written word. Champions of court reporting, though, argues the opposite. 

a. no change

b. have argued

c. argue

d. will argue

c

400

Melissa thought to herself, "theres no way its already May." 

(2 errors)

there's no way it's 

400

Please continue to apply this action step, think through your explicit language use, and how to instruct everyone. 

provide instruction


instruct 

500
These flights would allow UCD students to experience microgravity. Specifically they investigated the combustion of biofuel droplets.

a. no change

b. could investigate

c. would be able to investigate

d. were investigating 

c

500

Members of the hard-hit community of Arabi are expressing shock and also gratitude that they are still alive following Tuesday’s devastating twister.

a. are expressing shock, and also gratitude that

b. are expressing shock, and also gratitude that,

c. are expressing shock; and also gratitude that

d. no change

b

500
Physician assistants tend to believe their job is about serving their patients, creating healthy habits, and being doctor's assistants. 


2 errors

assisting doctors