Correct or Wrong
Christine loved her first week at APU she made a lot of new friends. (use a subordinating conjunction)
Christine loved her first week at APU (because/since) she made a lot of new friends. (ID = no comma)
Chapel at APU on the first Sunday of the month in December.
A sentence fragment. (no predicate)
sub+phrase+phrase+phrase+phrase
I like going to the mall but he likes to get ice cream.
A run-on sentence. (needs comma)
APU is so big I get tired of walking sometimes.
APU is so big; I get tired of walking sometimes.
Whenever my sister sings along with the commercials at night.
A sentence fragment.
dep clause+phrase+phrase
I fell off my bike and my brother kept going.
A run-on sentence. (comma needed)
My dad went to In-N-Out to get food while my mom went to the grocery store to buy soda.
Correct.
Movie night is my favorite I do love the popcorn! (coordinating conjunction)
Movie night is my favorite, and I do love the popcorn!
Sit down.
Not a sentence fragment. (understood you)
I was laughing so hard, I fell down and hit my face.
Run-on sentence. (comma-splice)
Shaking his new boss's hand, Jay knew he would like working there.
Correct
My car broke down I need to buy another one. (coordinating conjunction)
My car broke down, so I need to buy a new one.
I asked my mother to bake chocolate chip cookies.
Not a sentence fragment.
I love those shoes, they look great on you.
A run-on sentence. (comma splice)
Since Cindy wasn't in class, I took notes so that she wouldn't miss anything.
Correct.
It wasn't much further we couldn't make it. (coordinating conjunction)
It wasn't much further, (but/yet) we couldn't make it.
The doll that turned its head when I looked at it.
A sentence fragment. (no predicate)
sub+dep clause+dep clause
APU is great place to visit everyone is so friendly.
A run- on sentence.