The boys snuck home late that night. Then waited for the consequences.
The boys snuck home late that night, then waited for the consequences.
100
He gave his mother an extravagant gift after the argument. In spite of everything.
In spite of everything, he gave his mother an extravagant gift after the argument.
100
An important part of my life have been the people who stood by me.
An important part of my life has been the people who stood by me.
100
The two best things about the party was the food and the music.
The two best things about the party were the food and the music.
100
In case you haven’t noticed my real name doesn’t appear in the article.
In case you haven’t noticed, my real name doesn’t appear in the article.
200
I don’t believe its finally Friday.
I don’t believe it’s (it is) finally Friday.
200
The cat was licking it’s tail.
The cat was licking its tail.
200
The man jumped into a black sedan and he drove away before being noticed.
The man jumped into a black sedan, and he drove away before being noticed.
200
She was beautiful and she was happy and she was full of life.
She was beautiful, and she was happy, and she was full of life.
200
Before she had time to think about it Sharon jumped into the icy pool.
Before she had time to think about it, Sharon jumped into the icy pool.
300
While walking on the sidewalk, Mary found a sparkly girl’s bracelet.
While walking on the sidewalk, Mary found a girl’s sparkly bracelet.
300
After finally setting off on the trail, the morning felt more exciting.
After finally setting off on the trail, he felt the morning was more exciting.
300
When Jonathan finally found his dog, he was so happy. (The dog or Jonathan?)
Jonathan was so happy when he finally found his dog.
300
Don felt a lot of anger and bitterness as a result of Marie’s decision. This is what ended everything. (What ended everything? Don’s anger and bitterness or Marie’s decision?)
Don felt a lot of anger and bitterness as a result of Marie’s decision. Her choice ended everything.
300
She excepted his offer to drive her home.
She accepted his offer to drive her home.
400
It was a breathe of fresh air to meet someone so genuine.
It was a breath of fresh air to meet someone so genuine.
400
She tried to sneak out of the house her mother saw her leaving.
She tried to sneak out of the house, but her mother saw her leaving.
400
He ran through the field as fast as he could all the while rain was soaking him to the bone.
He ran through the field as fast as he could. All the while rain was soaking him to the bone.
400
The woman never went into the city, because she didn’t feel comfortable driving in traffic.
The woman never went into the city because she didn’t feel comfortable driving in traffic.
400
He wants to get a degree in engineering, or medicine.
He wants to get a degree in engineering or medicine.
500
Sam knew immediately, what was going to happen next.
Sam knew immediately what was going to happen next.
500
Old cars, that have been left in a junkyard, are an eyesore.
Old cars that have been left in a junkyard are an eyesore.
500
The bouquet of flowers on the table, belongs to Mary.
The bouquet of flowers on the table belongs to Mary.
500
He wanted to learn more about careers in programming, engineering, biochemist, and research scientist.
He wanted to learn more about careers in programming, engineering, biochemistry, and research science.
500
My intention was to take her out to dinner, however I decided not to invite her after all.
My intention was to take her out to dinner; however, I decided not to invite her after all.