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I enjoyed the cinco de mayo program at danny jones middle.
What is capitalize "c", "m", "d", and "j"
100
Madison cleaned the living room and Audrey cleaning the kitchen.
What is add a comma before "and" and change "cleaning" to "cleaned."
100
When my cousins visited they left there game at our house.
What is insert a comma after "visited" and change "there" to "their."
100
Combine the two sentences - Large boulders can become sand. Mountains can become hills.
What is "Large boulders can become sand, and mountains can become hills."
100
Combine the sentences - German Shepards are used in police work. They can also be family pets.
What is "Although German Shepards are used in police work, they can also be family pets."
200
"I'm going to read my book" said Josie.
What is add a comma after "book?"
200
Andrew wanted to win the trophy, so he practiced every night.
What is "correct as it is."
200
Of all the paintings in the gallery, Emily liked the one by the French artist best.
What is the sentence is correct as it is.
200

Combine the sentences - Native American boys were taught how to hunt. Native American girls were taught how to grow a garden.

What is "Native American boys were taught how to hunt, and the girls were taught how to grow a garden.

200

Revise the sentence - Although it is surrounded by a skull made up of 22 bones. The brain still deserves all the protection we can give it.

What is delete the period, replace it with a comma, and make the "T" lowercase.

300
This is an important part of our saturday outing.
What is capitalize the "s".
300
Combine the two sentences into a compound sentence - Jeremy had basketball practice. Jeremy also had homework to do.
What is "Jeremy had basketball practice, but he also had homework to do."
300
When I looked ahead I could sea one trail, but beyond that were several more trails.
What is change "sea" to "see."
300
Revise the sentence - Break up the crayons then drop them into muffin tins.
What is "Break up the crayons, then drop them into muffin tins."
300
Combine the sentences - When it stands on its hind legs. It is two times taller than an adult human.
What is "When it stands on its hind legs, it is two times taller than an adult human."
400
Maggies' dress is the most beautiful dress at the dance.
What is change the apostrophe - "Maggie's."
400
I was hungry as a bear, and ready to eat Grandma's apple pie.
What is delete the comma.
400
I dropped down on my hands and knees, to help my sister pick up her toys.
What is delete the comma after "knees."
400
Revise the sentence - It began with the Magic Kingdom and to add Epcot Center later.
What is "It began with the Magic Kingdom, later to add Epcot Center."
400
Revise the sentence - For example, if you touch a hot stove with your finger there are neurons ready to relay a message of pain to your brain.
What is insent a comma after "finger."
500
Dad said that we would leave our vacation on April, 24 2012.
What is delete the comma after "April" and insert it after 24?
500
Ella suggested we go to the library. And stop at the store along the way.
What is delete the period after "library", insert a comma, and change the "A" to a lowercase letter.
500
Quickly I jumped up, I tried to grab my books, but they fell out of my hands.
What is change the comma after "up" to a period.
500
Combine the sentences - At the time, M&M's were shipped in cardboard tubes. First given to soldiers in the Army.
What is "M&M's were shipped in cardboard tubes and given to soldiers in the Army."
500
Revise the sentence - If I had my own room, I would paint it a color appropriate for a teenager and hang some posters without no Disney princesses and unicorns on them.
What is delete "no".