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Vincent Crabbe is very good at solving riddles especially when they involve numbers.

Vincent Crabbe is very good at solving riddles, especially when they involve numbers.

100

I spent the afternoon taking a nap meanwhile Gilderoy Lockhart was busy cleaning, doing laundry, and going grocery shopping.

I spent the afternoon taking a nap; meanwhile, Gilderoy Lockhart was busy cleaning, doing laundry, and going grocery shopping.

100

Zazu is leaving for a road trip therefore he better put new tires on his car soon.

Zazu is leaving for a road trip; therefore, he better put new tires on his car soon.

100

Pumbaa loves dancing to music. Especially if it's upbeat and extremely loud.

Pumbaa loves dancing to music, especially if it's upbeat and extremely loud.

200

Haymitch Abernathy spent the afternoon reading on the porch, he finished three books.

Haymitch Abernathy spent the afternoon reading on the porch; he finished three books.

200

Severus Snape forgot to clean his armor before battle he is worried that it smells bad.

Severus Snape forgot to clean his armor before battle; he is worried that it smells bad.

200

Mufasa forgot to bring his towel to the beach however he can use his oversized sweatshirt to keep warm.

Mufasa forgot to bring his towel to the beach; however, he can use his oversized sweatshirt to keep warm.

200

Timon never throws away his old school assignments, he has so many stacks of paper that he had to move some to the garage.

Timon never throws away his old school assignments; he has so many stacks of paper that he had to move some to the garage.

300

Peeta Mellark and his tap dance teacher went door to door this morning. Singing their favorite songs to their neighbors.

Peeta Mellark and his tap dance teacher went door to door this morning, singing their favorite songs to their neighbors.

300

Hagrid watches a lot of TV. Especially during the winter.

Hagrid watches a lot of TV, especially during the winter.

300

Cho Chang hollered my name running toward me with the oversized stuffed animal she'd just won.

Cho Chang hollered my name running toward me with the oversized stuffed animal she'd just won.

300

I built a campfire last night. Which inspired Oliver Wood to tell ghost stories.


I built a campfire last night, which inspired Oliver Wood to tell ghost stories.

400

Luna Lovegood talked to the class of third graders about prejudice. Choosing her words very carefully.

Luna Lovegood talked to the class of third graders about prejudice, choosing her words very carefully.

400

Moaning Myrtle kept repeating this question how did I eat the whole pizza without anyone noticing?

Moaning Myrtle kept repeating this question: how did I eat the whole pizza without anyone noticing?

400

Ginny Weasley leaned against the window waiting for her mom to stop talking to the teacher.

Ginny Weasley leaned against the window, waiting for her mom to stop talking to the teacher.

400

There was only one thing left to say to the uncommonly kind stranger thank you.

There was only one thing left to say to the uncommonly kind stranger: thank you.

500

The teacher offered to show us how to parallel park: we decided to ask Katniss Everdeen for help instead.

The teacher offered to show us how to parallel park; we decided to ask Katniss Everdeen for help instead.

500

Sirius Black found three dollars on the sidewalk he spent the money at a lemonade stand.

Sirius Black found three dollars on the sidewalk; he spent the money at a lemonade stand.

500

During the hike Peter Pettigrew was in the mood for a healthy snack his neighbor however had only packed whipped cream.

During the hike, Peter Pettigrew was in the mood for a healthy snack; his neighbor, however, had only packed whipped cream.

500

This is the issue while a lot of people may attend Draco may still get bored and leave. 


 

This is the issue: while a lot of people may attend, Draco may still get bored and leave.