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Bill, Jill, Bo, Joe, and I are going down to the fair for corndogs
period at the end
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Can we visit tokyo, Japan when I am older?
Capitalize Tokyo
Every paragraph should start with what?
INDENT!
Name a type of hook
quote/lyric, figurative language, facts/statistics, Question (last resort), anecdote
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When are we going to visit grandma in florida again?
Capitalize Florida
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"Can we have more apple pie? said John.
Quotes after pie and question mark
What does the beginning of every introduction need to grab the reader's attention?
a hook!
What is an anecdote?
short story/Personal experience
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She were going to Walmart, but she had a coupon for Target.
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When will he stop trying two cheat on his tests?
two --> to
How many body paragraphs should you have?
2
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There are alot of clothes on the floor.
change alot to a lot
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Their going to go to work on Thursday and Friday at Taco Bell.
Their to They're
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Jennifer try to play with her friends, but they were in quarantine.
try to tried
What is the last paragraph?
conclusion
Name a way to substantiate an opinion
facts, experts, details,
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Billy and i like cinnamon rolls and chocolate milk to.
Capitalize I. to --> too
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I cant help but notice that the cafeteria food smells good.
apostrophe in can't
The hook and the thesis make up which paragraph?
the introduction