Edit and Revise
Edit and Revise x2
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BONUS!
EXTRA
100

Find the editing error:

Bill, Jill, Bo, Joe, and I are going down to the fair for corndogs

period at the end

100

Find the editing error: 

Can we visit tokyo, Japan when I am older?

Capitalize Tokyo

100

What is the strategy we use to craft an SCR?

RATE strategy

100

How many paragraphs should you write for an ECR?

4
100

Combine these 2 sentences for clarity.

These knives were expensive. It was common for dinner guests to bring their own knives to dinner.

These knives were expensive, so it was common for dinner guests to bring their own knives to dinner.

200

Find the editing error:

When are we going to visit grandma in florida again?

Capitalize Florida

200

Find the editing error:

"Can we have more apple pie? said John. 

Quotes after pie and question mark

200

What does the R of RATE tell you to do? 

Restate the question

200

What do you do in the first paragraph of an ECR?

Restate and Answer the prompt

200

Combine the following sentences for clarity.

I love chocolate cake.

I also enjoy a slice of cheesecake occasionally.

I love chocolate cake, and I also enjoy a slice of cheesecake occasionally.

300

Find the editing error:

She were going to Walmart, but she had a coupon for Target. 

were to was
300

Find the editing error:

When will he stop trying two cheat on his tests?

two --> to

300

How many pieces of evidence do you need to have in a SCR?

ONE

300

What do paragraphs 2 & 3 include?

Evidence and Explanations that backup your answer

300

Combine the following sentences for clarity:

She ordered the brownie sundae. He opted for the banana split.

She ordered the brownie sundae, yet he opted for the banana split.

400

Find the editing error:

Their going to go to work on Thursday and Friday at Taco Bell. 

Their to They're

400

Find the editing error:

Jennifer try to play with her friends, but they were in quarantine.

try to tried

400

Restate this question: Why does the author include the details in paragraph 2?

The author includes the details in paragraph 2 because -

400

What should we always do before we start to type our ECR?

Read the article to find the answer 

OR

Set up scratch paper

400

Use NO comma and a subordinating conjunction to combine these sentences!

after, although, because, if, since, until, whenever, while

Cakes need to cool after baking. The air inside them needs to settle.

Cakes need to cool after baking because the air inside them needs to settle.

500

Find the editing error: Hint* 2 errors

Billy and i like cinnamon rolls and chocolate milk to.

Capitalize I.     to --> too

500

Find the editing error: 

I cant help but notice that the cafeteria food smells good. 

apostrophe in can't

500

Restate the following question: How does the author prove the claim in the article?

The author proves the claim in the article by -

OR

The author proves the claim by -

500

What is the last paragraph about?

Restate the introduction

500

Use NO comma and a subordinating conjunction to combine these sentences!

after, although, because, if, since, until, whenever, while

A slice of cheesecake might have 35 grams of sugar. A cup of fruit might have 10 grams.

A slice of cheesecake might have 35 grams of sugar while a cup of fruit might have 10 grams.