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Bill, Jill, Bo, Joe, and I are going down to the fair for corndogs
period at the end
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Can we visit tokyo, Japan when I am older?
Capitalize Tokyo
What is the very first thing we do when we start an essay?
INDENT!
How many kinds of hooks are there?
6
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When are we going to visit grandma in florida again?
Capitalize Florida
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"Can we have more apple pie? said John.
Quotes after pie and question mark
What does the beginning of every introduction need to captivate the reader?
a hook!
What is an anecdote?
Personal experience
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She were going to Walmart, but she had a coupon for Target.
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When will he stop trying two cheat on his tests?
two --> to
What are the two D's that go into the body paragraph?
Describe and Details
What is a strategy we use in writing?
CUPS, ARMS, pitchforking...etc
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Their going to go to work on Thursday and Friday at Taco Bell.
Their to They're
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Jennifer try to play with her friends, but they were in quarantine.
try to tried
What do I call the last paragraph?
the "wrap it up" paragraph!
What should we always do before we start to type our essay?
BRAINSTORM!!
Find the editing error: Hint* 2 errors
Billy and i like cinnamon rolls and chocolate milk to.
Capitalize I. to --> too
Find the editing error:
I cant help but notice that the cafeteria food smells good.
apostrophe in can't
What is our conclusion formula?
Type + Broad statement = Conclusion
Where, in our essay, do we need to state our topic of the essay?
In the introduction