Punctuation
Comparison 1
What Change, if any?
Comparison 2
Run-on, Frag, Sentence?
100

Even though she works long hours. She keeps working hard after she gets home.

Change the period to a comma after the word hours and lowercase the s in she 

Even though she works long hours, she keeps working hard after she gets home.

100

Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Bob and her was the more well behaved dog.

Change more well behaved to most well behaved

 Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Bob and her was the most well behaved dog.

100

Dear Mr. President, 

I would like to request an interview at your company.

 Sincerely, Mr. Hamm

No change needed

100
I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the swiftliest of any in the contest.
What is change swiftliest to most swiftly? I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the most swiftly of any in the contest.
100
Because it requires a lot of skill and determination.
What is a fragment?
200

My sister needed help with her social study's project this week.

Change the word study's to studies 

My sister needed help with her social studies project this week.

200

Of the three turtles Henry and she have, Boxer is the more active.

 change more active to most active

 Of the three turtles Henry and she have, Boxer is the most active.

200

Dear Marsha

Do you want to visit the museum with me?

 Your best friend, Elizabeth

comma after Marsha

200
Of the many trucks we looked at today, Jess and I think the last one is the more suitable for hauling equiptment.
What is change more suitable to most suitable? Of the many trucks we looked at today, Jess and I think the last one is the most suitable for hauling equiptment.
200
Water can be found in the earth's surface and it can be found under the earth's surface.
What is a run-on?
300

Its their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.

Change Its to It's

 It's their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.

300

The toddlers behaved much more agreeable after their naps.

change more agreeable to more agreeably

 The toddlers behaved much more agreeably after their naps.

300

"That is great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game" said Coach Pringle.

add a comma after the word- game

 "That is great! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game," said Coach Pringle.

300
Until this year, Betsy was fastest than I was and would always win our races.
What is change fastest to faster? Until this year, Betsy was faster than I was and would always win our races.
300
If you want to become famous.
What is a fragment?
400

For a majority of students, it is important to have assignments that are like real world situations.

Add a hyphen between real and world

 For a majority of students, it is important to have assignments that are like real-world situations.

400

Of the two plans, Charles's plan was the most effective plan.

 change most effective to more effective

 Of the two plans, Charles's plan was the more effective plan.

400

All of those long hours of practise finally paid off!

correct the spelling of practise --to practice

All of those long hours of practise finally paid off!

400
Val and I were surprised that the class member who agreed with us the more heartily was Al.
What is change more heartily to most heartily? Val and I were surprised that the class member who agreed with us the most heartily was Al.
400
Being a straight-A student is great, but undestanding the material is more important.
What is a sentence?
500

While I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot.

Change the period to an exclamation mark

 While I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot!

500

Of all the girls in my class, I liked Sarah more.

 change more to most

 Of all the girls in my class, I liked Sarah more.

500

Repeated downpours cause out land to flood, however, the flood does not last too long.

change the first comma to a semicolon? 

Repeated downpours cause out land to flood; however, the flood does not last too long.

500
When compared to Galveston, Sweatwater gets the most rain.
What is change the most to more? When compared to Galveston, Sweatwater gets more rain.
500
When it rains, the rain forms runoff, the abundance of rain causes some areas to flood.
What is a run-on?