Changes???
Even though Ella works long hours. She keeps working hard after she gets home.
What change, if any, is needed for these two sentences?
Change the period to a comma after the word "hours," and make the "s" in "she" lowercase.
Even though Ella works long hours, she keeps working hard after she gets home.
Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Bob was the more well behaved dog.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "more" to "most".
Of all the dogs at the obedience school, the beagle belonging to Bob was the most well behaved dog.
Mr. President,
I would like to request an interview at your company.
Sincerely,
Mr. Hamm
What change, if any, is needed in this letter?
What is change the comma to a colon?
Mr. President:
I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the quicker of any in the contest.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "quicker" to "quickest".
I was proud that the plane Ann and I made flew the quickest of any in the contest.
Because it requires a lot of skill and determination.
Is this a complete sentence? Why or why not?
No.
It doesn't have a subject.
My sister needed help with her social study's project this week.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "study's" to "studies".
My sister needed help with her social studies project this week.
The turtle was wisest than the hare, so he won the race.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
What is change "wisest" to "wiser".
The turtle was wiser than the hare, so he won the race.
Dear Marsha,
Do you want to visit the museum with me?
Your best friend,
Janice
What change, if any, is needed in this letter?
I thinks the last one is the most difficult of all.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "thinks" to "think".
I think the last one is the most difficult of all.
Water can be found in the earth's surface and it can be found under the earth's surface.
Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a complete sentence?
Its their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "Its" to "It's".
It's their job to let us know if the games have been rained out.
The toddlers were more grumpier before their naps.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Remove the word "more".
The toddlers were grumpier before their naps.
"Wow! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game" said Coach Pringle.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Add a comma after the word "game".
"Wow! Stephen did not allow any goals to be scored in tonight's game," said Coach Pringle.
Until this year, Betsy was fastest than I was and would always beat me in a race.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "fastest" to "faster".
Until this year, Betsy was faster than I was and would always beat me in a race.
If you want to become famous.
Is this a complete sentence? Why or why not?
No.
It doesn't have a predicate.
For a majority of students, it is important to has assignments that are like real-world situations.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "have" to "has".
For a majority of students, it is important to have assignments that are like real-world situations.
Jackie's team was the more energetic of all the teams.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change more to most.
Jackie's team was the most energetic of all the teams.
All of those long hours of practise finally paid off!
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "practice" to "practice".
All of those long hours of practice finally paid off!
Change "was" to "were".
Val and I were surprised that the class member who agreed with us the most was Albert.
Being a straight-A student is great, but undestanding the material is more important.
Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a complete sentence?
I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot.
What would be the best transition word to add to the beginning of this sentence?
a)But b)Also c)While d)However
c)While
While I was minding my own business walking through the woods, a scorpion stung me on the foot.
Mrs. Craig was the better teacher I ever had.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change better to best.
Mrs. Craig was the best teacher I ever had.
The heavy downpours caused minor flooding but, the flooding didn't last long.
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Move the comma from after "but" to before "but".
The heavy downpours caused minor flooding, but the flooding didn't last long.
Have you heard the song he writed last week?
What change, if any, is needed in this sentence?
Change "writed" to "wrote".
Have you heard the song he wrote last week?
When it rains, the rain forms runoff, the abundance of rain causes some areas to flood.
Is this a fragment, a run-on, or a complete sentence?