Revising
Ravi has not used the most effective word in sentence 7. To improve this sentence, he should change improved to -
A enhanced
B expanded
C altered
D increased
C altered
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 36 and 37?
A Even though there are some benefits to GMOs, I cannot see past the disadvantages and the effects.
B Even though there are some benefits to GMOs; I cannot see past the disadvantages and the effects.
C Even though there are some benefits to GMOs: I cannot see past the disadvantages and the effects.
D Even though there are some benefits to GMOs and I cannot see past the disadvantages and the effects.
A Even though there are some benefits to GMOs, I cannot see past the disadvantages and the effects.
What change needs to be made in
sentence 14?
A Change There to Their
B Change countries to countrys
C Change consequinces to consequences
D No change needs to be made.
C Change consequinces to consequences
What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 15?
A Insert a comma after agencies
B Insert a period after sold and capitalize the word there to change it to two sentences.
C Change the period to an exclamation mark
D No change needs to be made.
B Insert a period after sold and capitalize the word there to change it to two sentences.
How should sentence 31 be changed?
A Change are to were
B Change labeled to label
C Change canada to Canada
D No change needs to be made.
C Change canada to Canada
Mia does not have a strong closing paragraph. Which sentence could be added before sentence 44 to BEST help her wrap up the article?
A After researching both the positives and negatives of GMOs, I feel that for me personally, the risk is not worth it.
B There are many positives and negatives in the discussion about GMOs.
C I hope you now feel the same way I do about GMOs and decide to eat less products that contain GMOs.
D Products are not always clearly labeled “Non-GMO” so it is important, as a consumer, to look at labels closely.
A After researching both the positives and negatives of GMOs, I feel that for me personally, the risk is not worth it.
What is the BEST way to write sentence 11?
A Today people are worried that genetically modified foods might be dangerous for people to eat so of the lack of in-depth research and testing as these foods are fairly new.
B Today people are worried that genetically modified foods might be dangerous for people to eat also of the lack of in-depth research and testing as these foods are fairly new.
C Today people are worried that genetically modified foods might be dangerous for people to eat otherwise of the lack of in-depth research and testing as these foods are fairly new.
D Today people are worried that genetically modified foods might be dangerous for people to eat because of the lack of in-depth research and testing as these foods are fairly new.
D Today people are worried that genetically modified foods might be dangerous for people to eat because of the lack of in-depth research and testing as these foods are fairly new.
What change needs to be made in
sentence 34?
A Change resistance to resistence
B Change nutrient to nutreint
C Change vaccines to vacines
D No change needs to be made.
D No change needs to be made.
What is the correct way to write sentence 43?
A The best way to stay away from GMOs today is to buy organic foods, which are GMO-free, and buy foods that have a “Non-GMO Project” icon on it.
B The best way to stay away from GMOs today is to buy organic foods which are GMO-free, and buy foods that have “Non-GMO Project” icon on it.
C The best way to stay away from GMOs today is to buy organic foods, which are GMO-free and buy foods that have a “Non-GMO Project” icon on it.
D The best way to stay away from GMOs today is to buy organic foods; which are GMO-free; and buy foods that have a “Non-GMO Project” icon on it.
A The best way to stay away from GMOs today is to buy organic foods, which are GMO-free, and buy foods that
How should sentence 19 be changed?
A Change tries to try
B Change and to so
C Insert a coma after products
D No change needs to be made.
B Change and to so
Ravi would like to add the following detail to the second paragraph (sentences 7-10).
For example, most of the corn, cotton, and soybeans planted in the United States are genetically modified.
Where should this sentence be inserted?
A After sentence 7
B After sentence 8
C After sentence 9
D After sentence 10
C After sentence 9
What is the correct way to write sentence 38?
A It scares me to know that a huge (but undetermined) amount of our produce is genetically modified and that up to 95% of certain crops are modified.
B It scares me to know that a huge, but undetermined, amount of our produce is genetically modified and that up to 95% of certain crops are modified.
C It scares me to know that a huge; but undetermined, amount of our produce is genetically modified and that up to 95% of certain crops are modified.
D It scares me to know that a huge - but undetermined - amount of our produce is genetically modified and that up to 95% of certain crops are modified.
B It scares me to know that a huge, but undetermined, amount of our produce is genetically modified and that up to 95% of certain crops are modified.
What change needs to be made in
sentence 13?
A Change worry to wory
B Change longterm to long-term
C Change effects to affects
D No change needs to be made.
B Change longterm to long-term
A punctuation mark is missing after example in sentence 4. To fix this error, which of the following should be inserted?
A comma
B semicolon
C period
D No change needs to be made.
A comma
How should sentence 26 be changed?
A Change her to my
B Delete the comma after diet
C Change have to has
D No change needs to be made.
A Change her to my
How should sentence 24 be revised?
A As I am getting older I am starting to notice the actual importance of eating nutritious, and healthy food.
B As, I am getting older, I am starting to notice the actual importance of eating nutritious and healthy food.
C As I am getting older, I am starting to notice, the actual importance of eating nutritious and healthy food.
D As I am getting older, I am starting to notice the actual importance of eating nutritious and healthy food.
D As I am getting older, I am starting to notice the actual importance of eating nutritious and healthy food.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 20 and 21?
A Genetically modified foods and crops are the future they will not go away and will only advance from where it is now.
B Genetically modified foods and crops are the future, they will not go away and will only advance from where it is now.
C Genetically modified foods and crops are the future, so they will not go away and will only advance from where it is now.
D Genetically modified foods and crops are the future: they will not go away and will only advance from where it is now.
C Genetically modified foods and crops are the future, so they will not go away and will only advance from where it is now.
What change needs to be made in
sentence 41?
A Change pesticides to pestisides
B Change commonly to commonely
C Change effects to affects
D No change needs to be made.
C Change effects to affects
What is the correct way to write sentence 22?
A Once people stop worrying and disregarding GMO products; then it will lead to companies putting more money and research into these products to improve them.
B Once people stop worrying and disregarding GMO products: then it will lead to companies putting more money and research into these products to improve them.
C Once people stop worrying and disregarding GMO products. Then it will lead to companies putting more money and research into these products to improve them.
D Once people stop worrying and disregarding GMO products, then it will lead to companies putting more money and research into these products to improve them.
D Once people stop worrying and disregarding GMO products, then it will lead to companies putting more money and research into these products to improve them.
How should sentence 10 be changed?
A Change see to sees
B Change has to have
C Change grow to grew
D No change needs to be made.
B Change has to have
Mia would like to add the following detail to paragraph 3 (sentences 30-35).
However, surveys show that 93% of Americans believe GMOs should be labeled.
Where should this sentence be inserted?
A Before sentence 31
B Before sentence 32
C Before sentence 33
D Before sentence 34
B Before sentence 32