Removing Unnecessary Words
Charles was excited, and nervous, and horrified, when he got his license.
Charles was excited, nervous, and horrified, when he got his license.
Charles was excited, nervous, prepared for his job interview.
Charles was excited, nervous, and prepared for his job interview.
I went to the store and picked up an apple and it was really crisp and juicy and fresh.
I went to the store, picked up an apple, and it was really crisp, juicy, and fresh.
Charles entered the school through the door.
Charles entered the school.
Do you want to go to the store.
Do you want to go to the store?
Charles himself was from Florda, although he hadn't been back there in a lot of years.
Charles himself was from Florda, although he hadn't been back there in years.
Charles walked to his work meeting because he was late.
Charles quickly walked to his work meeting because he was late.
We cleaned all the kitchen while our parents were out for dinner.
We cleaned the whole kitchen while our parents were out for dinner.
Charles sat down in one of the chairs at his table to eat dinner.
Charles sat down at his table to eat dinner.
I am ok but scared out of my mind!
I am ok, but scared out of my mind!
Charles was at a racetrack watching them with a smile.
Charles was at a racetrack watching with a smile.
We should watch a show I am bored.
We should watch a show because I'm bored.
Charles walked in to his job interview and was little nervous.
Charles walked into his job interview and was a little nervous.
Charles expected his boss to sit behind the desk, where he could draw authority from it, but he didn't.
Charles expected his boss to sit behind the desk, but he didn't.
Charles set his alarm clock for 7 a.m..
Sam set his alarm clock for 7 a.m.