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100

At noon____ glistens on lake Tahoe

The bright sun  or   many lights

The correct answer is: The bright sun

100

Involvement in sports can provide many benefits to young people. At our school, for example, kids can choose from baseball, basketball, volleyball, football, or soccer, depending on the season. Young athletes can enjoy many positive experiences when involved in sports. Sports can play a very important role in students' lives. For these reasons, all students should get involved in sports.


by including more evidence to support the main idea

by stating the main idea clearly


by including more evidence to support the main idea

100

The biologist got down next to the rotting log, carefully examining a small egg sack nestled in the moss.

Now, revise the sentence to show that the biologist got down by crouching with her knees bent.

The biologist  next to the rotting log, carefully examining a small egg sack nestled in the moss.


squatted        plopped down     dropped       settled in

squatted

100

Which is a thesis statement?


Government-run health care is a bad idea because it would likely result in longer wait times to see doctors and a reduced quality of medical care.

The effects of expanding and improving access to government-run health care programs will be addressed in the following essay.


Government-run health care is a bad idea because it would likely result in longer wait times to see doctors and a reduced quality of medical care.

200

The girl in the front row    ______    at the invitation to come onstage.

blush      or      blushes

The correct answer is: blushes

200

Honesty is one of the most essential elements of a good friendship. Without honesty, people can't trust each other. If people can't trust each other, then the friendship won't last. I have known my best friend Sophia since kindergarten. Sometimes you might need to talk about difficult things with a friend. Maybe a friend betrayed you, and you're upset. The best way to handle the situation is to share your feelings openly with your friend. Learning to solve problems with open communication can make your friendships stronger and longer-lasting.


by removing text unrelated to the main idea

by stating the main idea clearly


by removing text unrelated to the main idea

200

After not finishing her chores for three weeks in a row, Pam's mom met with her, requesting an explanation for her behavior.

Now, revise the sentence to show that Pam's mom met with Pam in an argumentative way.

After not finishing her chores for three weeks in a row, Pam's mom  her, requesting an explanation for her behavior.


encountered       connected with      confronted      chatted with


confronted

200

Which is a thesis statement?


Athletic programs that receive government funding produce better athletes than other kinds of programs do.

The effectiveness of having athletes raise money for their programs will be addressed in the paragraphs that follow.


Athletic programs that receive government funding produce better athletes than other kinds of programs do.

300

________  think that the town needs a new town library more than a new stadium.

My father    or        All of us

The correct answer is: All of us

300

Our school should not stop requiring students to wear uniforms. Allowing children to wear whatever they want is a terrible idea. Students won't be as focused on learning. They will be thinking about their clothing and comparing themselves to their friends. Their families will have to spend more money on clothing. School uniforms are easier for students. Students can focus on their schoolwork instead of worrying about their clothing. No one will be singled out for what they wear since everyone wears the same thing.


by using transitions between sentences

by using shorter sentences


by using transitions between sentences

300

The rat traveled along the length of the fence before sliding under the overgrown trumpet vine.

Now, revise the sentence to show that the rat traveled carefully to avoid being seen.

The rat  along the length of the fence before sliding under the overgrown trumpet vine.


migrated     crept     advanced     proceeded


crept

300

Which is a thesis statement?


As a result of her contributions to U.S. diplomacy, former U.S. Secretary of State Madeleine Albright was awarded the Presidential Medal Medal of Freedom in 2012.

Madeleine Albright was the most important U.S. secretary of state because she improved relations with China, fought the spread of nuclear weapons, and traveled to North Korea.


Madeleine Albright was the most important U.S. secretary of state because she improved relations with China, fought the spread of nuclear weapons, and traveled to North Korea.

400

In the story,  _____ crushes the rosebushes in his path.

the beasts with red eyes        or            the monster with green fur

The correct answer is: the monster with green fur

400

Have you ever wondered about the history of the roller coaster? These thrilling rides actually got their start in St. Petersburg, Russia. In the seventeenth century, man-made hills were built out of tree trunks, and lumber, and covered with ice. People climbed stairs up to seventy feet high, and mounted sleds carved from blocks of ice. The rides went as fast as fifty miles an hour, and lasted just a few seconds. Similar rides were built in Paris in the early 1800s. They had small wheels attached to the sleds, and ran on a track. The first roller coasters appeared in the United States by the late 1800s.


by removing unnecessary commas

by fixing run-on sentences


by removing unnecessary commas

400

Fans and sidelined teammates cheered wildly as four players went for the rebound.

Now, revise the sentence to show that the players went for the rebound with quickness and urgency.

Fans and sidelined teammates cheered wildly as four players  for the rebound.


competed      tried     reached      scrambled


scrambled

400

Which is a thesis statement?


In response to the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001, Congress passed legislation to create the Transportation Security Administration.

The Transportation Security Administration ought to revisit its rules regarding carry-on luggage.


The Transportation Security Administration ought to revisit its rules regarding carry-on luggage.

500

Usually my mother and father ____ the new year by dancing until midnight.

Celebrate       or     Celebrates   

 

The correct answer is: Celebrate

500

There were 2,206 passengers aboard the Titanic when the luxury ship hit an iceberg and sank on April 14, 1912. One was Elsie Bowerman, who was traveling to America to visit friends and family. She made it into a lifeboat and was rescued. Bowerman was lucky; only 705 passengers survived. Among the dead were architect Washington Roebling, author Jacques Futrelle, and fifty-six children. The sinking of the Titanic remains one of the most famous maritime disasters in modern history. Bowerman went on to fight for women's right to vote, serve as a nurse during World War I, become a lawyer, and work for the United Nations.


by removing the sentence about Bowerman's luck

by finishing one topic before moving on to another


by finishing one topic before moving on to another

500

Using tweezers and a flashlight, Meg carefully took out a splinter from her dog's paw.

Now, revise the sentence to show that Meg took out the splinter firmly and with precision.

Using tweezers and a flashlight, Meg carefully  a splinter from her dog's paw.


yanked       removed       extracted      wrenched


extracted

500

Which is a thesis statement?


Did Francis Crick deserve to win the 1962 Nobel Prize for his role in the discovery of the structure of DNA?

Rosalind Franklin should have won the 1962 Nobel Prize in chemistry instead of Francis Crick.


Rosalind Franklin should have won the 1962 Nobel Prize in chemistry instead of Francis Crick.