Points of View
Editing Task
Editing Task
Writing Prompts
Text Structure
100

Which point of view is this written in:

"I saw the dog and the cat delivering mail this morning.  Dr. Finch and I laughed so hard at the thought of it that we peed our pants."

First person 

100

The bird swooped under the tree.

The bird swooped OVER the tree. 

100

"I'm going to cry if I don't get ice cream Dr. Finch exclaimed.  

"I'm going to cry if I don't get ice cream," Dr. Finch exclaimed!

100

You have just read two stories about going fishing.  What are the steps to take to catch a fish?

Informative 

100

Cats and dogs are both popular pets, but they are different in many ways. Cats are independent animals that enjoy spending time alone, while dogs are social and love being around their owners all the time. Cats use a litter box inside the house, but dogs need to go outside several times a day. However, both cats and dogs can be loyal companions and show affection to their families. Cats show love by purring and rubbing against you, while dogs wag their tails and jump with excitement. Whether you choose a cat or a dog, both can bring happiness to your home.

Compare and Contrast

200

What point of view is this written in?

"Alice was eating her breakfast when all of a sudden a bird swooped in and said, "I'm going to steal your food!"  She growled and scared the bird away."

Third Person 

200

Correct this sentence:

I should go to the mall this weekend, if my mom says it's okay.  

I CAN go to the mall this weekend, if my mom says it's okay.  

200

I was sleeping in my new bed but I couldn't get comfortable. 

I was sleeping in my new bed, but I couldn't get comfortable.  

200

You have read two passages about recycling.  How important is it to the earth to recycle?

Opinion

200

The community garden had a big problem. All the vegetables were dying because there wasn't enough water during the hot summer. The plants were wilting and turning brown. Maria and her neighbors decided to work together to solve this problem. They installed a drip irrigation system that slowly watered the plants each morning and evening. They also added mulch around the plants to help keep the soil moist. Thanks to their solution, the garden came back to life, and by fall, they had a wonderful harvest of tomatoes, lettuce, and beans.


Problem and Solution 

300

Has pronouns like I, My, Me, We, Us.

Shows one character's perspective. 

First Person

300

Change the verb run to a past progressive tense.

Was/Were running

300

My mom went to the park, they saw a bird.  

My mom went to the park, SHE saw a bird. 

300

You have just read "Because of Winn Dixie."  Finish telling the story from Opal's dad's point of view.  

Narrative

300

Because it snowed six inches overnight, school was canceled the next morning. As a result, all the students were thrilled to have an unexpected day off. Since the snow was fresh and fluffy, Maya and her friends decided to build a snowman in the backyard. The cold temperature meant the snow would stay around for several days. Since the snow lasted so long, the town held a winter festival in the park. Therefore, what started as a snowstorm ended up bringing the whole community together for a fun celebration.

Cause and effect


400

Has pronouns like she, he, him, her, they, it.

Can show multiple character's perspectives.  

Third Person

400

Change the verb eat to future progressive tense.

will be eating

400

I went to the park.  I fed the ducks. 

I went to the park, and I fed the ducks.  

400
You have just read two stories about technology in the workplace.  Explain what types of technologies help make a workplace run better.  

Informative

400

Last summer, I learned how to make pizza from scratch. First, I mixed flour, water, and yeast to make the dough. Next, I let the dough rise for an hour until it doubled in size. Then, I stretched the dough into a circle on a baking sheet. After that, I spread tomato sauce over the dough and sprinkled cheese on top. I added pepperoni and vegetables for the toppings. Finally, I put the pizza in the oven and baked it for fifteen minutes until the cheese was melted and bubbly. When it came out, it was the best pizza I had ever tasted!

Chronological, time order, sequence of events, sequential order

500

What point of view is this:

"Sleeping in late wasn't an option for me on Saturday.  Alice, Samuel, and Dr. Finch were coming over for a study party!"  

First Person

500

Mrs. Judge said "you are going to rock this test"!  

Mrs. Judge said, "you are going to rock this test!"

500

The dog and the cat.

The dog and the cat chased each other. 

500

You have read the play and the story version of "The Wizard of Oz."  Which one better tells the story of Dorothy and the Scarecrow?

Opinion

500

The old bookstore on Main Street was a magical place. Tall wooden shelves stretched from the floor to the ceiling, filled with hundreds of colorful books. The air smelled like old paper and vanilla candles. Soft golden light came through the front windows, creating cozy reading nooks in every corner. Comfortable armchairs with worn leather and plush cushions invited readers to sit and stay awhile. The owner had decorated the walls with vintage posters and hanging plants that made the store feel warm and welcoming, like stepping into a friend's living room.


Descriptive