Nominate one person from your group to write the revision on the piece of notebook paper. The problem of pollution in big cities.
Example: The problem of pollution in major cities can be alleviated by limiting the number of cars allowed to drive on city streets, increasing the minimum gas mileage on cars and creating more efficient public transportation systems.
Nominate one person from your group to write the revision on the piece of notebook paper. Being a vegetarian is better.
Example: Being a vegetarian is preferable to eating meat for mental, spiritual, and physical reasons.
Nominate one person from your group to write the revision on the piece of notebook paper. My parents and I are very different.
Example: My parents and I are different in the way we socialize, dress and choose what to eat.
A. Some of the major causes behind common diseases in the United States could be traced to three main factors: poor diet, lack of exercise, and smoking.
B. What are some of the main causes behind many of our diseases in the United States today?
C. This essay examines some of the major causes behind many of our diseases in the United States today.
A.
A thesis statement can not be about two topics.
True
Choose somebody in your group to Write a thesis statement about why school should start later in the day.
ex. School should start later in the day because _____ and _____.