Narrative
True or false:
If there are two passages, I do not have to use information from both texts in my narrative writing piece. I can choose the one that fits my story best.
False- You DO have to use information from both texts EQUALLY
What must be included in your first paragraph of an argumentative essay that lets the reader know your opinion?
Hint: starts with a "C"
CLAIM!
True or false
An informational essay should include my opinion
FALSE- you are INFORMING the audience. An argumentative essay "argues" your opinion
What is wrong with this sentence?
there is a musty smell as soon as I enter the cafeteria that burns my throat and brings tears to my eyes.
Capitalize the "T" on There
True or False: Your essay must have more than one paragraph
True! It must be a multi-paragraph essay!
True or false:
It is okay to quote evidence in a narrative piece
False- you should incorporate the evidence without quoting it like you would in an argument or info writing
True or false:
It is okay to say "I think" or "I believe" in my claim
False! Avoid using "I"
Should you use "I" in an informational piece. For example, "I know this because..."
NO! there are plenty of ways to prove your evidence without saying "I know this because". This (proves, suggests, explains...)
True or false: It is okay if my writing is not legible as long as I tried I will get a good score
False- you must write so that the reader can easily read the writing!
What is sensory language?
Using the 5 senses/detailed description to describe a moment in time
Point of view is...
What is the perspective in which a story is told, such as first person (I), second person (you), and third person (he, she, it).
Hook- Interest the reader
Overview - background on the topic
Thesis - claim
What should be included in the intro of your informational piece?
Hook- interest reader
Overview- provide background info on topic
T- Thesis- what will you be writing about?
what is missing?
“During a challenge like giving a speech, teens release more stress hormones and have higher blood pressure than kids or adults.” This solidifies the fact that teens are much more likely to have a strong reaction to stress and embarrassment.
Intro to the quote like
For example, in paragraph 5 Hicks explains, "(quote)"
In what writing genre would sensory language most likely be used?
Narrative
Name three elements a narrative must have
characters, setting, plot (first three)
May accept at teacher discretion: dialogue, pacing, point of view, conflict, etc
If your claim is in your intro then what should your body paragraphs be doing in an argumentative essay?
The body paragraphs are proving your claim with evidence from the text
If you were given an article with information about Mr. Comely's beliefs about fear how would you "trace the development" of those in your essay?
Write an essay in which you trace the development of Mr. Comely's beliefs about fear. Be sure to cite evidence to support your analysis. Follow the conventions of standard written English.
Fix the errors:
In adventures of huckleberry finn,mark Twain portrays tom and huck as…
In Adventures of Huckleberry Finn, Mark Twain portrays Tom and Huck as…
How is an informational piece different from an argumentative?
In an argumentative essay, the writer is proving their claim (opinion). In an informative essay the writer is providing information meaning no opinions
What is wrong with this section of narrative writing?
"Hello." She gave a start, surprised. "Is is really you? I can’t believe it’s been so long!" "Sorry I’ve been such a hermit," I said, smiling.
Dialogue rules!
‘Hello.’
She gave a start, surprised. ‘Is is really you? I can’t believe it’s been so long!’
‘Sorry I’ve been such a hermit,’ I said, smiling.
I should only include information that supports my claim. I should not include evidence that supports the other side of the argument: true or false and explain why
False! You must have a paragraph that addresses the counterargument and include a rebuttal or reason why that argument is not strong.
What does delineating mean in this prompt?
Write an essay delineating the major differences between empathy and sympathy. Be sure to cite evidence to support your analysis. Follow the conventions of standard written English.
What is to describe with accuracy or in detail.
Fix the errors
Their are to many puzzle peaces two count.
There are too many puzzle pieces to count.
Explain how you would prepare for this writing assignment
Carefully read the selections and answer all aspects of the prompt
You have just read two passages about sports injuries in young people. Write an informational essay explaining the strategies parents and children can use to prevent sports injuries among young athletes.
Manage your time carefully so that you can plan your essay and do some prewriting. Be sure to
Your written response should be in the form of a multi-paragraph informational essay.
1) Figure out what style of writing (informational)
2)Find evidence form the text to use
3) Pre-write (graphic organizer or outline)
4) Write!