What is wrong with this thesis statement?
Despite the belief that animals do not have feelings, I think they do because animals communicate complex feelings, display empathy, and form social bonds.
The writer uses first person. "I think they do."
Is this ethos, pathos, or logos?
Nearly 25% of all car accidents are caused by drivers using cell phones while driving
Logos.
Using 25% (data) to appeal to logic.
Where can I find the thesis in an essay?
At the bottom of the first paragraph.
What is wrong with this thesis?
While it is true that fast food is convenient and tasty, it can contribute to obesity and worsen depression in some individuals.
There is not a third reason.
Is this ethos, pathos, or logos?
Smoking around kids is dangerous because the defenseless children are exposed to dangerous chemicals that can lead to coughing and difficulty breathing.
Pathos.
Appeals to emotion with "defenseless little kids."
What is a "claim" in an essay?
A claim is a strong opinion that can be PROVEN with evidence.
What is wrong with this thesis?
Although the internet can be a distraction, it provides access to knowledge, fosters global communication, and increases awareness of societal issues.
There is no stated opinion.
Is this ethos, pathos, or logos?
The Centers for Disease Control recommends getting a flu vaccine each fall.
Ethos.
The writer cites "The Center for Disease Control" as the authority in the subject.
What is imagery?
Imagery is descriptive language, often using the five senses.
What is wrong with this thesis?
Although many people believe that school uniforms limit creativity, they actually help equality, make distractions go down, and make safety go up.
The reasons given are not CONCISE. They are vague. (Not specific language)
Is this ethos, pathos, or logos?
“Choosy moms choose Jiff.”-Jiff Peanut Butter Commercial
Ethos.
The writer cites "moms" as the authority on the best peanut better.
What is connotation?
The feeling or IDEA of a word.
"She's bossy." vs "She's commanding."
Name 5 things that make a good thesis.
Answers include: 3 reasons, concessionary clause, specific language, specific topic, avoids 1st person, states an opinion, is evidence based, debatable and interesting.
Is this ethos, pathos, or logos?
“60% of the time, it works every time.” -Anchorman
Ethos.
The writer cites "Anchorman" as the authority on the subject, even when the logic doesn't work.
What are the three rhetorical appeals?
A rhetorical appeal is a way to persuade an audience using logic, emotion, or authority.
ANSWER: Ethos, Pathos, Logos