Round 1
Round 2
1

Angrily I threw my pen on the floor. 

Angrily, I threw my pen on the floor 

1

Miss Ripley told Ellis "beautiful handwriting!"

Miss Ripley told Ellis, "beautiful handwriting!"

2
Yesterday I played three games of Fortnite.

Yesterday, I played three games of Fortnite.

2

The lightbulb was still flickering but I could tell it was about to turn off.

The lightbulb was still flickering, but I could tell it was about to turn off.

3

Miss Morley smiled happily and said "Good Morning."

Miss Morley smiled happily and said, "Good Morning."

3
Every morning I brush my teeth comb my hair and have a big stretch.

Every morning, I brush my teeth, comb my hair and have a big stretch.

4

Big Ben the tower clock is located in London.

Big Ben, the tower clock, is located in London.

4

Excitedly I shouted "good morning!" when Miss Chadwick called my name during the register.

Excitedly, I shouted, "good morning!" when Miss Chadwick called my name during the register.

5

My toothpaste has blue red white and green stripes.

My toothpaste has blue, red, white and green stripes.

5

Angrily I told my mum "I don't like green grapes I like oranges bananas apples pears and red grapes!"

Angrily I told my mum "I don't like green grapes, I like oranges, bananas, apples, pears and red grapes!"