Incorrect or correct
Vague pronouns
100
Julie was about to pick up a girl horse but she fell asleep.
What is incorrect
100
Shakisha wanted to play with Abbie but she said no.
What is ; Shakisha wanted to play with Abbie but ABBIE said no.
200
Hunter and Travis were throwing the football and he threw the football harder.
What is incorrect
200
Catherine was in the library and Laila asked her to get her a book.
What is ; Catherine was in the library and Laila asked CATHERINE to get her a book.
300
Katie and Gracie were skating and she fell on her face.
What is incorrect
300
Claire was out shopping and she asked the cash register lady if she'd ever worked at a different store.
What is ; Claire was out shopping and she asked the cash register lady if the LADY had ever worked at a different store.
400
Billy and Andre were playing a video game but Andre lost.
What is correct
400
Sidney was walking down the hall and she asked Mrs.Price what her grade was in Social Studies.
What is ; Sidney was walking down the hall and she asked Mrs. Price what MRS.PRICES grades were.
500
Harry was an only child and katie's life was a blast.
What is correct
500
Mckenzie and her sister went shopping , and she bought a dress.
What is ; Mckenzie and her sister went shopping , and MCKENZIE bought a dress.