Grammar
Editing Tips
Writing Tips
Wordy Gurdy
General Info.
100

Correct this sentence:

The baseball were going to hit me in the head.

The baseball was going to hit me in the head.

100

Whose job is it to make the book as clear as possible?

The Editor

100

Name two examples of empty words we use in writing.

Very

and the like

in my opinion

just

really

100

Can someone be dieing?

Uhh...NO

100

What week are we in for this semester?

What is week 6

200

Kitty said Go ahead and shoot her. She lied to me. 

Kitty said, "Go ahead and shoot her. She lied to me."

200

What is the first level of editing?

Developmental / Structural

200

What word (between that and which) does one choose to go with non restrictive clauses?

Which

200

How can learning to edit affect your worship?

We see things on PowerPoints that others do not see.

200

Name one of the poems we read in class

Still I Rise by Maya Angelou

If by Rudyard Kipling

300

We don't know everything, we know more than we think, we always strive for perfection and good will.

We don't know everything. We know more than we think. We always strive for perfection and good will. 

We don't know everything, but we know more than we think. We always strive for perfection and good will. 

300

When self-editing, what is one thing to do first?

Read the document out loud

Print out the document and let someone else read it out loud.

300

Good and able writers, who write stories, will be aware of and take notice to trim off all ...?

Redundancies

300

The man stabbed her with a glass shard and then was caught lieing her body down. 

The man stabbed her with a glass shard and then was caught laying her body down. 

300

Who is the author of Wordcraft?

Who is Jack Hart?

400

If we always think about the things we are doing.

If we always think about the things we are doing, then we will have many friends. 

400

Editing is the most important part of creating a clear, understandable, and interesting book. Nonfiction writers have to go beyond simple grammar checks and...(what else do they need to do?)

Fact check for accuracy

Make sure they write to their audience

Check tone 

Make sure to keep the book on track and focused on the subject

400

What are three things a good writer will leave out of their writing?

Arrogance to the reader

Obscenity and profanity

Un-necessary jargon / technical details

400

She axed me a question. 

She asked me a question.

400

What is the cover color of The Editor's Companion?

What is white / off-white sprinkled with the alphabet

500

Make this sentence clear.

The Secret Service conducts financial crimes and counterfeiting investigations. 

The Secret Service investigations into financial crimes and counterfeiting investigations. 

500

According to Dunham: What do editors do?

Bridge the gap between good writing and ordinary writing.

500

What is the difference between a good writer and a Christian writer?

Christian writers should strive to be the best writers they can. There should be no difference except in the worldview they present to the readers. 

500

I am in love thorough and through!

I am in love through and through!

500

What did we make in the Instructions section of the class?

What is a Cootie Catcher / Fortune Teller