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I am going to discuss methods the government could take into account to decrease the circulation of private cars in the city center.
I am going to discuss THE methods (THAT) the government could take into account to decrease the circulation of private cars in the city center.
to downsize the circulacion of individual cars.
to reduce the circulacion of private cars.
To begin with, Argentina’s public transport system is not the greatest, whenever you want to take the bus you have to wait almost 15 minutes for it to arrive, and then if there is a long queue you would have to wait for 15 more minutes for another one to come; so if the government invested in it, it could be faster and more efficient; thereby people who usually use cars would consider taking the bus instead, and the circulation of private vehicles would decrease.
To begin with, Argentina’s public transport system is not the greatest. Whenever you want to take the bus you have to wait almost 15 minutes for it to arrive, and then if there is a long queue you would have to wait for 15 more minutes for another one to come. If the government invested in public transport, it could be faster and more efficient. In this way, people who usually use cars would consider taking the bus instead, and the circulation of private vehicles would decrease.
Nowadays, almost 13 million Argentinian inhabitants own a car; so many people, right?
Nowadays, almost 13 million Argentinians own a car. Ranked only 22nd in the world, Buenos Aires is one of the most traffic-ridden cities on the planet.
In this essay I am going to talk about an important and common discussion that is how the government can make people don't use their private cars in the center of the city. For instance, it makes the city look like it is crowded and like it has a lot of pollution.
engaging the reader
how the government can make people don't use their private cars in the center of the city
how the government can make people not use their private cars in the center of the city
The State has to cut down the use of cars in order to prevent more contamination.
The State has to cut down the use of cars in order to prevent more pollution.
With all this said, I believe that upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method.
All this being said, I believe that upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method.
I believe upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method.
I believe that upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method.
Thirdly, a good idea would be to raise the car taxes, and lower the transport prices.
In the task is says you should choose TWO ideas and develop them. Not THREE.
I would say that the power is in politicians, so they are the most responsible to make these become true.
I would say that the power is in politicians, so they are mostly responsible to make these become true.
...if they don't live too far away from their destiny.
...if they don't live too far away from their destination.
I believe upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method because it would benefit the whole community and make Argentina more attractive, I personally take the bus on my way home from school and an improvement would be great.
I believe upgrading the public transport system is the most convenient method because it would benefit the whole community and make Argentina more attractive. I personally take the bus on my way home from school and an improvement would be great.
People who usually use cars would consider taking the bus instead, and the circulation of private vehicles would decrease. Not to mention the fact that the ones who already use it would find themselves benefited.
People who usually use cars would consider taking the bus instead, and the circulation of private vehicles would decrease. Not to mention the fact that those who already use public transport would benefit from such changes.
To conclude, there are many things that the government can do to reduce the car circulation, and to make public transport more popular. [END OF ESSAY]
opinion? which one was the best option? what other things can we say in a conclusion?
You take too long to go or leave the centre and hardly ever you can arrive at the place where you want to go in time.
You take too long to go or leave the centre and hardly ever can you arrive at the place where you want to go in time.