Run-ons and Fragments
She loves to bake cookies, she never measures the ingredients
She loves to bake cookies, but she never measures the ingredients
She walked into the room and sees her friend waiting.
She walks into the room and sees her friend waiting.
She walked into the room and saw her friend waiting.
Students must submit their assignments on time, or you may lose points.
Students must submit their assignments on time, or they may lose points.
She studied hard for the exam; consequently, she forgot to bring her notes to class.
She studied hard for the exam; however, she forgot to bring her notes to class.
I enjoy reading books, watching movies, and to go hiking
I enjoy reading books, watching movies, and going hiking
The presentation was engaging, the audience listened carefully.
The presentation was engaging, so the audience listened carefully.
Last summer, I went to France and visit the Eiffel Tower
Last summer, I went to France and visited the Eiffel Tower
As we walked into the museum, you could immediately feel the excitement.
As we walked into the museum, we could immediately feel the excitement.
Her argument was well-structured. It lacked sufficient evidence to convince the readers.
Her argument was well-structured. However, it lacked sufficient evidence to convince the readers.
To be successful, one needs determination, focus, and working hard.
To be successful, one needs determination, focus, and working hard.
After the team won the championship. Celebrating late into the night.
After the team won the championship, they celebrated late into the night.
Yesterday, I walked to the store and buy some groceries. Then I cooked dinner and was watching TV
Yesterday, I walked to the store and bought some groceries. Then I cooked dinner and watched TV
Many informations were given during the lecture, but none of them were useful.
Many pieces of information were given during the lecture, but none of them were useful.
The weather was perfect for a picnic; in contrast, we decided to stay indoors and watch a movie.
The weather was perfect for a picnic; nevertheless, we decided to stay indoors and watch a movie.
The coach asked us to stretch, to warm up, and run a few laps.
The coach asked us to stretch, warm up, and run a few laps.
The students were excited about the field trip. Even though the bus arrived late.
The students were excited about the field trip, Eeven though the bus arrived late.
When the play started, the audience takes their seats. The actors performed brilliantly, and everyone is clapping at the end.
When the play started, the audience took their seats. The actors performed brilliantly, and everyone clapped at the end.
The Mount Everest is the highest mountain in the world, but not everyone knows that climbing the it requires months of preparation
Mount Everest is the highest mountain in the world, but not everyone knows that climbing the it requires months of preparation
First of all, the weather was bad; in addition, it was also cold and rainy.
First of all, the weather was bad; it was also cold and rainy.
The company values efficiency, dedication, and being innovative.
The company values efficiency, dedication, and innovation.
The movie was exciting it kept everyone on the edge of their seats it was also two hours long
Because the movie was exciting and kept everyone on the edge of their seats, no one noticed it was two hours long.
Last summer, we traveled to Italy and visit many historical sites. While we were there, my brother decides to start learning Italian, but he gives up after one week.
Last summer, we traveled to Italy and visited many historical sites. While we were there, my brother decided to start learning Italian, but he gave up after one week.
The water is essential for life, but not all the people have access to it.
Water is essential for life, but not all the people have access to it.
Although the traffic was heavy, however, we still arrived on time.
Although the traffic was heavy, we still arrived on time.
His arguments are not only well-reasoned but also appeal to emotions
His arguments are not only well-reasoned but also emotionally appealing