Commas
I went to the beach the mall and the museum all in one day!
I went to the beach, the mall, and the museum all in one day!
Whats up with him? He hasnt been to school for weeks!
What's up with him? He hasn't been in school for weeks!
Lennie removed his hat dutifully and laid it on the ground in front of him. Steinbeck 105.
"Lennie removed his hat dutifully and laid it on the ground in front of him" (Steinbeck 105).
hello, mary, how are you doing today?
Hello, Mary, how are you doing today?
I didn't want to go to Grandma's but they made me.
I didn't want to go to Grandma's, but they made me.
Its no big deal. I didnt unplug the computer, it isnt a problem.
It's no big deal. I didn't unplug the computer, it isn't a problem.
At one point, the author states: This room was swept and fairly neat, for Crooks was a proud, aloof man.
At one point, the author states: "This room was swept and fairly neat, for Crooks was a proud, aloof man."
this is my aunt, clara. she lives in pittsburg, kansas.
This is my aunt, Clara. She lives in Pittsburg, Kansas.
When we went to Kim's house did she ask for our cards?
When we went to Kim's house, did she ask for our cards?
Its head dragged on the ground. "Its still alive, isnt it?" I asked meakly.
Its head dragged on the ground. "It's still alive, isn't it?" I asked meakly.
Lennie is described as a huge man, shapeless of face, with large, pale eyes, with wide, sloping shoulders. Steinbeck 2.
Lennie is described as "a huge man, shapeless of face, with large, pale eyes, with wide, sloping shoulders" (Steinbeck 2).
i don't know about you, but i can't wait to see uncle jim this christmas.
I don't know about you, but I can't wait to see Uncle Jim this Christmas.
We wanted to adopt the small playful dog and not the fat lazy cat. But it turned out alright we still love Greg.
We wanted to adopt the small, playful dog and not the fat, lazy cat. But it turned out alright, we still love Greg.
Daily Double: The penguins nests are full of eggs this time of year.
The penguins' nests are full of eggs this time of year.
Lennie stroked the pup back and forth. We gonna have a little place - an' rabbits, he explained. Steinbeck 87).
"Lennie stroked the pup back and forth. 'We gonna have a little place - an' rabbits,' he explained" (Steinbeck 87).
i live on hawthorne drive in jasper county. my favorite candy is skittles. i live with my sister and my dad.
I live on Hawthorne Drive in Jasper county. My favorite candy is Skittles. I live with my sister and my dad.
I went with my cousin Georgiana to Webb City Missouri yesterday.
I went with my cousin, Georgiana, to Webb City, Missouri yesterday.
Caleb Moss house is awesome! The horses pens are huge, he has a pool, and he has an indoor movie theater!
Caleb Moss's house is awesome! The horses' pens are huge, he has a pool, and he has an indoor movie theater!
Steinbeck describes George as small and quick. Meanwhile, Lennie is described as a huge man. Steinbeck 2.
Steinbeck describes George as "small and quick." Meanwhile, Lennie is described as "a huge man" (2).
We are reading Of Mice and Men this fall. In September we will start our next unit.