Capture the Audience
How would you change this to use the you attitude
-our new flight schedule from Toronto to Montreal, which is on the hour every hour
-you can now fly from Toronto to Montreal, on the hour every hour
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How can you change this out of using a gender bias?
-foreman
-supervisor
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How can you change this sentence to not show arrogance?
-if you'd like to order, mail us a reply card
-To order, mail a reply card
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How would you earn respect rather than attack in this sentence?
-once again you've managed to bring our company down
-let's go over the website to see what went wrong and where we can improve
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How can you change this to not using a racial bais?
-Frank Clemi - Italian CEO
Frank Clemi - CEO
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How is one way you may show credability?
-honesty, objective, awareness of needs, knowledge, experience, expertise, proformance, sencerity
How would you change this from a negative to a positive?
-It is impossible to fix your car!
I'm sorry but your car won't be complete until Tuesday! Would you like to borrow a courtesy car for the time being?
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How can you change this to not using a age bias?
-Mary Kirazy, 58 joined our law firm
-Mary joined our law firm
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What is a way you can express yourself?
-Tone of voice
-Style
-Impression
-Vary of style (personal, informal, formal)
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How would you change this sentence to pursuade someone into working harder?
-I'm tired of seeing so many errors in your blog
-proof reading your blog may avoid embarrasing mistakes
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How can you change this to not use a disability bias?
-Disabled workers face many barriers on the job.
-Workers with physical challenges face many barriers on the job
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How would you change this style type from passive to active?
-You lost the shipment
-The shipment was lost
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How would you change the wording to not affect the audience's feelings?
-Cheap car
Pre-used car
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How can you change this to not using a racial bias?
-Not surprisingly Shing Tung Yo excels at math
-Shing Tung Yo excels at math
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How could you change this sentence from passive to active?
-Legal problems are created by this contract
-This contract creates legal problems
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