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Change the following to third-person omniscient:
Little Red Riding Hood opened the door to Grandma’s room and stepped inside. She sniffed lightly. There was a strange smell in the room that she didn’t like. She squinted at Grandma. Why was the room so dark?
“Hello, my dear. Come closer.” Grandma patted the bedspread beside her.
Grandma’s voice was huskier than normal. Well, she was sick, after all.
Little Red moved closer to the bed until she could see Grandma. What was wrong with Grandma’s eyes?
“What big eyes you have today, Grandma.”
“All the better to see you with, my dear.”
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Little Red Riding Hood opened the door to Grandma’s room and stepped inside. She sniffed lightly. There was a strange smell in the room that she didn’t like. She squinted at Grandma. Why was the room so dark?
“Hello, my dear. Come closer.” The Wolf patted the bedspread beside him. The girl needed to be closer so she couldn’t avoid the attack. The wolf’s mouth watered in anticipation of this juicy snack.
Grandma’s voice was huskier than normal. Well, she was sick, after all.
Little Red moved closer to the bed until she could see Grandma. What was wrong with Grandma’s eyes?
“What big eyes you have today, Grandma.”
Drat, the girl sounded suspicious. He would have to quickly reassure her so she didn’t leave. “All the better to see you with, my dear.”